Hi guys ! I am Khoo Yi Shao and I am a boy.I am afraid that you think that I am a girl . I want to if I had a chance . Just joking ! Let us now talk about today topic . Today my topic is about growing up . Some of you dirty minded thinking of puberty . Actually it is not . The title is "What if you never grow up?".
Now let me ask all of you . Why should we grow up ? It is because we must earn money . If we do not grow up , we would not die of old age but we would die one day . When we do not die of old age, our parent will die from that one day.It is a fact that we will face one day . Lastly there will be no people to depend on but to die of hunger just because we cannot grow up to earn money to buy food ! Isn't that silly ? Well ...... there is advantages when we do not grow up like we could play with baby toys like Lego which increase your creativity to create robots . I used to to play my favourite toy , Lego , but my parent threw it away as they said that toys are for baby but not for my age . I do not think so but that is what my parent said !
If I could stop ageing , I could play Lego or even other addicting toys especially those that increase my creativity . The bad thing is that I couldn't watch M 16 , 18 or 21 movies . I had to asked my uncle to buy DVD for me to watch it . How annoying ! There is no different when human have all the same type of brain . If adult can watch it , why can't a child watch it too . That is no logic! Agree? Wish you think so too .
Now my story is ending , tell my whether you want or do not want to grow up ? Put your answer in the comment box . I will appreciate if you do that . Do comment on how to improve my blog or my writing too . Thank you for your nice cooperation !
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Hi Yishao,
When I mean "an introduction", I am not referring to a "self-introduction". I'm saying, your piece should have an introduction to the topic, a body, and a conclusion.
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